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Zion
May 14, 2014 23:25:05 GMT
Post by zdynasty on May 14, 2014 23:25:05 GMT
name : zion evil or good : good species : saiyian sex: male age: 5 he has super saiyan 1 2 and 3 Techniques: Kamahamaha (yes he learned that because that just what i wanted) Ki blast flight History: Zion is a saiyain kid and he excaped planet vegeta's exploshin his dad and mom well was the only good saiyain's so that passed on to Zion. Zion has no home he lives in the wild by him self. he learned the kamahamaha when he was being attacked by a lion and learned super saiyain 1 and 2 when fight agents the evil stick man ( I will make him latter) and super saiyain 3 he was training and it came Appearance: yes his tail is gold because it can i like it that way Attachment Deleted
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Zion
May 15, 2014 3:17:41 GMT
Post by Pieter Wolfbane on May 15, 2014 3:17:41 GMT
Welcome to the site, Zion. I hope you'll enjoy your stay here! Now, I've got a list for ya to work on, before we can accept ya and get ya goin'! 1) First thing I've noticed: You're not using the template we've provided. Here's the link to it: Blank Template
2) Next thing, concerning your character is a Saiyan: Most tails are brown. What is different about your saiyan tail? Genetic coloring go off and caused it to become yellow? 3) Also, not all saiyans are evil and Vegeta is existent. You'll need to brush up in the following areas: Techniques and Tier Levels of Techniques and Techniques of Masters of Each School on Each planet, The forum's timeline, and the rules of the Forum. 4) Transformations only available are Tier 1. In saiyan and half saiyan with tail cases: Oozaru/Giant Ape. 5) The history need rewriting, so it can meet up with the forum's actual timeline. We're in the year 2800. Also, when you write it, if you have a lot of history in mind for your 5 year old and you don't have a lot of time, bullet note it so you can flush it out more later. Myself, Bao, and the newly elected Ryoshi are available to consult on ideas! Not to mention your fellow members too! 6) Quick note on techniques: Any basic ki blasts and ki beams are readily available to you, as well as powering up and down. However, Flight is not, as well as sensing energy as they are advanced techniques. You only get 3 tech slots (unless you're a human, demon, or special oriented role like Lord of the World Trade Organization or Turtle Hermit or something like that). Alright, woo! That was a lot! Just reply you're finished editing when you get around to it.
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