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Post by Pieter Wolfbane on Aug 7, 2014 3:42:32 GMT
*Change from Pieter to Bao*
Krow's making a new guy altogether now, with a new race. That's why you're seeing this profile right here.
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Post by Pieter Wolfbane on Sept 10, 2014 23:14:56 GMT
I see your character and raise a thought to you: Perhaps it is not your character who is mighty, but the pet of yours. Your techniques equal commands given to it. In addition, the power level of your character would be your pet's power level. As you pointed out in the cbox, this character is intended to be an average human, rather than an alien race with human characteristics or the sort.
In which case, you gain command: Attack, Command: Defend, Command: Fire!, or however you wish to flavor the character's command techniques. At the same time, this can lead to an explanation, albeit a small one that's later explained in your BP, of who your character is and what his goals are for players who're interested in learning about who you are, as this character. Can ya dig it, bud?
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Yaboku
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Post by Yaboku on Sept 10, 2014 23:53:32 GMT
I can dig and since my character does resemble a Naruto Character i have decided to axe him and just make a normal human who just uses good old fashion martial arts, like one of the scrubs you see at the World Martial Arts Tournament.
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Post by Yaboku on Sept 10, 2014 23:55:12 GMT
my character is done and ready to be looked over.
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Post by Pieter Wolfbane on Sept 11, 2014 2:12:16 GMT
Hmm... I'm thinking that you can apply a gimmick system, much like Bao's system of combat. Knowing Riley's set abilities, perhaps your character can have the same Ki problem as Tao's character. While he can't use Ki, the ki is present in the power of his attacks. We'll need a way of at least keeping your character up to par with the fighters, as a civilian. What sort of system do you think describes Daiichi Krow here? What makes him a unique person, aside from being based on yourself? All of our characters, after all, are extensions of ourselves. We just need to tap into what makes this person unique.
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Post by President Bao on Sept 12, 2014 15:21:35 GMT
Will address more fully tomorrow, but I raise the notion that you have them as cybernetic organicly remodelled humans like 17 and 18 were, and that perhaps your other naruto aspects like magical eyes and ancient ninja families may more be remnants of their previous less original iteration than anything. (for example, apparently your own character has unique eyes amoung the 'species' already unique eyes, is it a racial trait or just something your guy has going on? Maybe their natural eye colours are black white and grey and he just happens to have two colours, like a girl I know from Uni ) There is actually a good opportunity here too, if you so choose, to link this sort of character/premise with other characters such Rusa and Hinote/Pheonix Corp in multiple possible ways. (P.C. also being a research division which is apparently focused on enhancing humans for earthly defence purposes). Anyway, heading off to bed, just thought I'd put those up for you to mull over in the meantime.
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Post by President Bao on Sept 13, 2014 4:31:54 GMT
It seems your previous post is gone(I saw it cause I checked in right before heading to bed this morning), if that was you who deleted it then all is good, if it was one of the other admin/mods however could you please not delete a members posts, ESPECIALLY grievances, as all such commentary should be public and readily available if the one originally voicing it made it so.--- So to address your concerns - I brought up the naruto comment only because you yourself said in cbox(and repeated in the fourth comment on this thread) that you were redoing your character and race because you felt your last one was too derivative of naruto. I can only offer feedback based on what you have told me/indicated as a desired outcome . No one as far as I am aware is or has ever forced you to change anything, and indeed it would be a bit hard given I didn't even get a chance to respond to your character app . (The fact that we accepted your race before this new version without even mentioning naruto should be indication enough of our openness and willingness to accept whatever RP people are interested in pursuing however). The second comment about not being welcome - everyone here has been open and friendly towards you Krow, I have seen only kind and inviting comments being directed your way so I'm unsure why receiving a slow pm answer from Pieter turned you so bitter; I hope that whatever personal issues are fuelling your insecurities/testy responses work themselves out and that you are both safe and healthy. and finally, if you are indeed joining Awakening then I hope you enjoy yourself , they are a good bunch of people and although their administration system is closed off and they're more NPC focused I'm sure they will be just as happy to have you as we were/are. If you so desire I can message the administrators of awakening to let them know of your particular needs/sensitivities to hopefully smooth your path and avoid possible issues you might have. (Speaking of which, I have a pm from you I believe Pieter passed on which I will also now also address )
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Post by Yaboku on Sept 13, 2014 12:48:06 GMT
No need to message Awakening, I have had a profile there since January, its actually the same exact one up here. I even rp'd there for some time but certain events in life had stopped me from really being online. Thank you for the help thou my friend. You are all a good group of people and I hope for the best for you all.
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