Datura
Archived
16,900 Power Level Transferred to Cado
PL: 20,259
Oozaru (x10)
Zeni: 478
Tag: @maize
Posts: 99
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Datura
Aug 29, 2014 20:55:32 GMT
Post by Datura on Aug 29, 2014 20:55:32 GMT
Name: Datura
Alias: Species: Saiyan
Gender:Male
Age: 20
Appearance:(Avatar)He stands about 5'5" tall and he weights nearly 180 lbs. His body i very lean and muscular.His face is average ,with a slight slender touch to it. His hair is full and spikes upward. His clothing he wears is a set he picked up on earth. It replaces his traditional Saiyan Clothing. It consist of a black tanktop , A black sleeveless leather jacket.He wears a black leather belt with a golden buckle , Black Pants. A pair of brown boots covers his feet. He also wears a pair of fingerless Leather gloves.
History: There isnt much history that goes along with Maize. He was born into the low-class saiyan family. He joined the military to open up windows for himself to get stronger and progress himself physically, and also to see the universe. He has heard stories of some the other worlds that reside beyond their space and they have intrigued his interest greatly. While on duty one day he received a chance to go on a mission to earth. So he volunteered to go and received the orders. The last thing he did was tell his parents good bye . After that he met up and headed off to earth.
Starting Planet: Earth
Techniques: [N1]Galick Gun Datura curls his fingers and places both his hands together at chest level facing the same direction ,so that the palm of his right hand is on the back of his left. Once Datura has gathered enough ki, he thrusts both hands forward to fire a powerful blast of energy. The result of the blast is a powerful, huge, Green-colored ki beam that emanates from his hands and body. Deals 33% of PL damage.
[UP2]Super Galick Gun -A full powered version of the Galick Gun. Deals 66% of PL damage.
Support:
[SU] Bakujutsu/Flight - Give Datura the ability to use his Ki for Flight.
Special
Transformations: Oozaru x10 of Power Level
Items: 500 Zeni
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Datura
Aug 30, 2014 16:20:49 GMT
Post by Hyoza on Aug 30, 2014 16:20:49 GMT
Well, it might be nice to see a bit more background to the character, but the only real problem with your app is the techniques. Ki blasts are a default ability all characters can use, so you don't need to use a technique slot for that. However, homing blasts would be a variant [V2] technique, and therefore would take up two technique slots. So, you'll need to decide what you want to do there. Note: They are a variant because they have a special characteristic - in this case homing in on opponents. You could have a more powerful [UP2] technique for two slots also, or two Novice-level techniques (plus the technique you are currently using for Bukujutsu). Up to you how you want to do it. EDIT: This page is your friend
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Datura
Archived
16,900 Power Level Transferred to Cado
PL: 20,259
Oozaru (x10)
Zeni: 478
Tag: @maize
Posts: 99
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Datura
Aug 30, 2014 18:55:52 GMT
Post by Datura on Aug 30, 2014 18:55:52 GMT
OK..this set up is new to me... When I get home and get a chance.. I'll do some editing.. And the history part. I was just going to start off an average person and see how he rises through the rp.
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Datura
Aug 30, 2014 22:25:24 GMT
Post by Hyoza on Aug 30, 2014 22:25:24 GMT
Yeah, I figured. Like I said, it's not a huge problem. It just might be nice to have a few more details, like what he's done before coming to Earth, who his family are, if he has any connection to them (many Saiyans seemingly did not in the show). Just gives you some foundation to build on.
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Datura
Archived
16,900 Power Level Transferred to Cado
PL: 20,259
Oozaru (x10)
Zeni: 478
Tag: @maize
Posts: 99
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Datura
Aug 31, 2014 3:23:55 GMT
Post by Datura on Aug 31, 2014 3:23:55 GMT
Check my changes.. Let me know if its good.
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Datura
Aug 31, 2014 10:48:33 GMT
Post by Hyoza on Aug 31, 2014 10:48:33 GMT
Looks fine to me. Approved
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Datura
Aug 31, 2014 18:51:32 GMT
Post by Pieter Wolfbane on Aug 31, 2014 18:51:32 GMT
Hmm... Yeah, I see nothing wrong here myself. A quick note: Being that's an UP2 level, it'd be Super Galik Gun, while N1 would be the standard. Put in the regular Galik Gun before you head to your BP! You're all set.
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Datura
Oct 13, 2014 21:09:55 GMT
Post by Pieter Wolfbane on Oct 13, 2014 21:09:55 GMT
*Note* Confirming that there was a bit of confusion here. Super Gallick Gun (UP2) was supposed to be in the profile, but it got forgotten in the editing of the profile before approval.
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