Welcome to the site, matrix! I've got good news and I've got bad news for you.
Here's the honey: You've got an Arcosian and I'm going to help you with this character creation.
Now here's the hatchet in the back: You've got a massive amount of work ahead of you, considering you're also making a character on a world being attacked by the Solar Saiyan Empire's players.
1) Name: PolarPop sounds as though it'd be more this character's alias rather his name. Think of a pun off Ice/Frozen-based words.
2) Appearance: Black and Red Arcosians are not something that's possible in the Arcosian blood. You'll have to stick with the cool colored gems (Blue, Green, and Purple are your options here) and white skin. In addition, we need to see what each form will look like. Lastly, for this section, Brute and Monster forms are not there immediately to use. You need to get to the power level requirement, once you're accepted, for these forms to come of access
and it needs to be trained to be obtained.3) History: This history tells us nothing about whom your character is and why he's got a saiyan personality as an Arcosian, rather than being a guy who makes everyone submit to him and rule them with an iron fist. What was the reason why your character is a disappointment to his parents? Why's he nicknamed, "Cannon Fodder" and "The Bomb"? These seem like things you should implement into your history and techniques. I recommend looking at this thread, as an example for organizing your character:
wodsouls.freeforums.net/thread/1072/milacs-outlining-paragraph-planning-victoryI also recommend looking to other Arcosians for other information that are well established on site. In particular, I recommend giving
Hyoza a visit, to learn about Arcose as a whole, as he and
Zucceta are in the midst of writing the official lore of the site. This will get yourself onto an established, sure-footed position.
4) Starting Planet of Arcose: As I specified earlier, Arcose is in the midst of being attacked by the Solar Saiyan Empire (look here for details:
wodsouls.freeforums.net/thread/4089/bell-tolls-saiyan-invasion-de?page=1&scrollTo=26261). There are multiple threads going on for this invasion. Are you sure you wish to start on Arcose? There are other planets you can start on, like Earth and Brench. Give this a thought. Maybe even implement this bit in your history.
5) Techniques: I'll be honest, this is a little straight forward. Problem I'm having, right now is the following
a) You're not listing the techniques in an organized manner. I recommend looking at my profile, which is located in the signature, for assistance with organizing techniques and generating an idea for your techniques.
b) Big Bang Attack is a technique you can only acquire if you were taught it from the Queen of Vegeta and the SSE,
Zucceta, in a thread with her. You need to replace that with something else. I recommend, since you're an Arcosian, to go with Ki Sense, a support technique, so you can sense people coming at you.
c) You need to tag each individual ability with its proper description and level. Flight is (SU) and is to be read as "This character has learned to use his ki for flight," and Death Beam is (N1) with the description, "A powerful beam with the intent to kill someone. It charges 33% of the user's power level per post." Though you won't be keeping it, as you don't have the potential to know it, Big Bang Attack is (UP2). I recommend you look at our mechanics section for more information on techniques.