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Post by Deleted on May 21, 2015 2:47:00 GMT
FUKURUI
IDENTIFICATION Name: Fukusokurui (lit. "gastropod" in japanese)
Alias: Fuku, Soku, Rui, Fukurui, etc.
Species: Namekian
Class: Dragon Clan (Mystic Namekian)
Gender: Asexual/Agender
Age: 10 years
Birthplace: New Namek
PHYSICAL APPEARANCE
Fukurui is a Namekian with a muscular, lean, green body. He, like most Namekians, has a pair of antennae, pointed ears and somewhat sharp teeth. He has black eyes and stands at a height of about 5 feet and 10 inches. He has a thin, angular face with a pointed chin. Fukurui's attire consists of traditional Namekian clothing. He wears long robe-like garbs, mostly consisting of purple coloration with an orange belt around his waist.
PERSONAL DATA Personality: Fukurui is a kind and caring individual with compassion for all living things. He shows massive amounts of respect for other beings and treats all others as equals regardless of their intelligence levels or strength. He has very low tolerance for rude or destructive people and will do his best to stop them or minimize the amount of damage that they will/can do. Fukurui is rather quiet unless someone talks to him, but proves to be a friendly person to most, if not all, beings.
HISTORY History: Fukurui was born in New Namek after hatching from an egg as Namekians do. He was raised within the Dragon Clan of Namek and because of this was trained in mystical arts. Most of what he learned was support-based and was taught to him by older/more experienced Namekians of the clan. He had grown up very close to the Guru of New Namek and would one day dream of taking the place of the Guru. He also had dreams of travelling the universe, though, upon learning that there were more beings out in the universe outside of Namek.
Fukurui was a very sensitive young Namekian from birth and was always very softspoken. He was always curious and willing to learn. He would be told stories by whoever he could get to tell him of the history of the universe. After having been taught the horrors of the galaxy and that there are those out there willing to hurt others, Fukurui devoted himself to becoming stronger so that he could protect the innocent. His desire to travel and explore in conjunction with his desire for justice caused him to learned how to fight and utilize his ki. In addition, he learned how to perform a technique to heal the injured.
Starting Planet: New Namek
ARSENAL Offensive *Ki Beam --Fukurui fires a beam of ki from his palm.
Support *Flight --Fukurui uses ki to hover and fly. *Healing --Fukurui concentrates his ki to regenerate tissues of the injured to heal or lessen the effects of damage done to the body.
Special *N/A
INVENTORY 500 Zeni One-Use Pod
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Post by Hyoza on May 22, 2015 12:51:44 GMT
Hello Muri. As with your app for Muri, your Warrior Clan Namekian, this app has the same issues - your history could use some expansion, and the techniques need to be appropriately tagged. We also need to discuss a more solid mechanical function for your healing technique.
But before that, I want to confirm you're certain that you want to create two namekian characters at once? Bear in mind, you will not be allowed to hold both the Grand Elder and Warrior Clan leader positions at once. You will also not be permitted to have these two characters fuse.
My recommendation is that you think long and hard about which role you think would be a more interesting character, and focus on that one character for now. You can always return to your other Namekian app later.
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