Jenny Tonica
Archived
Zeni Transferred to Rosemary
PL: 500
Intense Struggle (x3)
Zeni: 5,552
Tag: @tonica
OOC Name: Ginge
Posts: 23
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Post by Jenny Tonica on May 20, 2017 7:09:50 GMT
Name: Jenny Tonica Alias: Jen Species: Human Gender: Female Age: 34 AppearanceHeight: 5' 6" Weight: -REDACTED- HistoryBorn in Age 2769 to the master of a prolific martial arts school, Jen was expected to carry on her father's work and become a master herself, some day. As a child, she was taught the key elements of patience and steadfastness, and eventually, the more mystical philosophy of the Phasmid School, only to grow apart from her father's teachings with time. As it would turn out, the child showed minor psionic prowess at a young age. By the age of three, she was lifting and bending spoons without touching them, and as her mind grew and developed, so too did her abilities. By the age of ten, she was able to lift a fully grown man with little trouble. At the age of twelve, she began to understand why it was that she shouldn't do these things just because she could. Her entrance into high school marked the divergence between Jen and martial arts. She had never cared for the fighting itself, but had loved the attention her father had given her and the time that they'd spent together. However, she now had friends and newfound freedom, and the two began to drift apart on their separate paths. At her mother's pressuring, her father resolved himself to wait out her rebellious phase and her return to the school. To her parents' chagrin, she never returned to the martial arts that she'd been raised with. Instead, she decided that she'd wanted to go into business, and attended college away from home as her power continued to grow. It was while she was away that the first major trauma of her life would occur. While out with her friends, a man with a gun had attempted to rob the seemingly-defenseless group. However, anger and fear clouded the young woman's judgement, and with the vast extent of her mind, she brutally killed the would-be mugger. It was months before she could forget the sound of his screams for long enough to sleep. After graduation, Jen returned home with a new goal in life: to help her parents and to finally make the school a success. With her knowledge and connections, the school began to flourish as students and sponsors came in, most eager to try their might against the daughter of the master. Though reluctantly, she eventually began to accommodate the many requests -some from her father, no less, and even began to enjoy it on some level. It was... fun to use her powers in new ways, she found. For a couple of years, life had seemed to be smiling upon her. With the success of the school, her father was able to find a successor among his students, and her bank account wasn't doing too poorly, either. However, the galaxy didn't appear to share the same views and goals as the Earthling... On an otherwise peaceful day, the sky itself fell upon Jen and her family. With an impossibly loud crash, a Saiyan attack pod collapsed the roof of their home and school, and out stepped a gargantuan man with long hair and battle armor. As the family pleaded for their lives, he slaughtered them all before finishing the job that his pod had started, and he reduced the building to nothing but rubble. Perhaps only due to dumb luck, the young woman managed to keep safe within a bubble of her own psychic power. Her parents were not as fortunate. When the chaos had finally died down, the woman was left to pick up the devastated remains that had once been her life. With her family and friends all dead in the aftermath of the Saiyan attack, Jen went to the newly-appointed government head to petition for a retaliation against the Saiyan Solar Empire. However, her voice went unheard, as the Earth entered into a truce with their attackers. Festering with rage and loss, she decided that the useless leaders of the planet were just as guilty for her family's death as the Saiyans. She began to plot, for revenge was a dish best served cold... Starting Planet: Earth Racial Traits Creative Mind Jen's quick wit and unorthodox creativity allow her to more quickly develop new techniques. She gains a new technique slot every 4,000 PL, rather than every 6,000.
Materialistic With her business sense and education, Jen gains an extra 10% zeni from such threads.
Transformations Intense Struggle (*3) By tapping into her latent power, Jen can increase her capabilities three fold during battle. After doing so, however, sheer fatigue and strain on her body and mind will render her unable to continue fighting. Once she reaches 20,000 PL, this ability can be used at-will.
Techniques: 3/3 Used
Offensive
Support
Utility Energy Suppression (UT1) Due to the magical nature of Jen's abilities, her body exudes no more ki than the average human being when not using her greater powers. With some focus, she can snuff out her own presence altogether.
Shapechange (UT) With a puff of smoke, Jen changes the very nature and structure of her body to that of anything she can visualize within her mind.
Telekinesis (UT) By utilizing her innate psionic ability, Jen manipulates objects that would normally be out of reach.
Special
Items: 500 Zeni 5,000 PL Guard One-Use Pod
With Bing's permission, I am resubmitting this character with major changes to her background. This is an alt character. I would like to skip the BP.
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Bing Gan
Administrator
PL: 374,871
Enlightenment (x16P), S. Ascension (x23)
Zeni: 13,528
Tag: @bingg
OOC Name: Bing/Biggums/TruetoCaesar
Posts: 3,722
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Post by Bing Gan on May 29, 2017 5:52:06 GMT
Hey there Jenny!
Your history and items seem to be in order, but I've been talking with staff about your Tier 2 Energy Suppression, and we believe it may be a bit too strong. Giving off citizen-level Ki while being able to use techniques at their normal power rate is a bit too powerful, so you'll have to be able to be sensed unless you want to swap to Android. If you want, you can flavor people sensing you as them sensing your magical prowess rather than your Ki, but that's the best I've got for you when it comes to using offensive techniques.
Also, Telekinesis would be considered a UT unless your version is an afterimage reflavor. Please swap it when you can.
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Jenny Tonica
Archived
Zeni Transferred to Rosemary
PL: 500
Intense Struggle (x3)
Zeni: 5,552
Tag: @tonica
OOC Name: Ginge
Posts: 23
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Post by Jenny Tonica on May 29, 2017 6:17:04 GMT
Alright. I've changed out the T2 version of Energy Suppression for the classic Shapechange, and corrected the Telekinesis mistake.
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Bing Gan
Administrator
PL: 374,871
Enlightenment (x16P), S. Ascension (x23)
Zeni: 13,528
Tag: @bingg
OOC Name: Bing/Biggums/TruetoCaesar
Posts: 3,722
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Post by Bing Gan on May 29, 2017 6:34:53 GMT
Much better!
Your BP has been skipped, and items added. Just make sure to apply for your guard in the proper section!
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