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Post by Taiga on Jul 27, 2017 4:38:47 GMT
Out of sheer curiosity, I've decided to share with you all a fan-fiction that I have been working on for a while, on and off as muse comes and goes. I'd like to know what those of you who read it think of it, either by commenting here or on the comment/review section on the page itself. I already know that there are a couple continuity errors, but I've embraced the mistakes and moved on. Here is the story's pitch: We all know the story of Dragon Ball, how Goku grew into the greatest hero Earth could ask for. Goku's entire life was turned upside down with the arrival of his older brother, Raditz. But, what if Raditz hadn't come to Earth alone?The premise of the story is purely What-If? scenario; being what if Turles was still part of the Planet Trade Empire/The Galactic Frieza Force, and decided to join Raditz on his mission to Earth? Before people tell me what I already know; yes, Turles is NOT Goku's brother, and I have (for some reason) chosen to write Goku's character while referring to him by his Saiyan name. The only times he is called Goku, is by his friends and family, since much of this story is technically told from Turles and Raditz's point of view. I hope you enjoy! Dragon Ball Z: Brothers in Blood
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Post by Vi-Poi on Jul 29, 2017 3:43:13 GMT
Neat story. You should lengthen it up.
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