Satin
Newcomer
PL:4,660; Demonic Will (x3): 13,980; Makyo (x8): 37,280; Items: One-Use Space Pod; Zenni: 500
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Satin
Oct 27, 2014 20:30:00 GMT
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Post by Satin on Oct 27, 2014 20:30:00 GMT
Name: Satin Alias: N/A Species: Demon Gender: Male Age: 1,234 Appearance: Demonic Will: Makyo Star: History:Born over a thousand years ago, Satin is one of the many descendants of Dabura himself. A year after he was born, he was trained by his caretaker in the ways of a demonic warrior. After many years of rough training (100 to be exact), he had finally became the size of your average 9 year old human and he was strong enough to hold his own against his sensei. But it wasn't enough to wage war on the world yet, so he continued to train but now it was on his own since his sensei had nothing else to teach him. He spent the next 800 years of his life training, and he eventually got on a level in which he could finally take on the world like he was destined to. For the next 200 (he was now 1,100), he plotted on world domination. As he plotted, his power was secretly being sealed away by his old caretaker, because he believed Satin was not mature enough to handle his power. Without realizing his lack of power, Satin found a portal into the world of the living and made his way to Earth. Starting Planet: Earth Techniques:Offensive Spiral Teleportation: (x4 Demon Technique) The user can use this technique to teleport themselves to different locations, the distance depending on their level of strength. -Under 1000 : 20 feet -1000 to 5000 : 1 mile -Over 5000 : As far as the user wants. Eye Beams SupportBukujutsu- The ability of Flight Ki Sensing SpecialN/A Items: 500 Zenni One-Use Pod
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Satin
Newcomer
PL:4,660; Demonic Will (x3): 13,980; Makyo (x8): 37,280; Items: One-Use Space Pod; Zenni: 500
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Satin
Oct 28, 2014 19:57:07 GMT
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Post by Satin on Oct 28, 2014 19:57:07 GMT
This is no longer a WIP, I am finished ...
PS , I joined as Jicama a while back ...
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Satin
Oct 30, 2014 3:45:17 GMT
Post by President Bao on Oct 30, 2014 3:45:17 GMT
Looks good to me, welcome back Jicama . When ready head over to the beginners section and make your beginners post.
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Satin
Nov 3, 2014 2:35:03 GMT
Post by Pieter Wolfbane on Nov 3, 2014 2:35:03 GMT
Got a question: Being that demons are now receiving special techniques that work differently than most techniques, which technique's being made into the x4 Demonic Technique and why's it different than the normal version?
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Satin
Nov 3, 2014 2:40:02 GMT
Post by President Bao on Nov 3, 2014 2:40:02 GMT
For now lets just let him make his beginners post We can sort out his demon tech later.
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Satin
Newcomer
PL:4,660; Demonic Will (x3): 13,980; Makyo (x8): 37,280; Items: One-Use Space Pod; Zenni: 500
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Satin
Nov 3, 2014 2:42:09 GMT
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Post by Satin on Nov 3, 2014 2:42:09 GMT
Okay , so if I edit a technique and add that to the description , would that count?
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Satin
Nov 3, 2014 2:47:06 GMT
Post by President Bao on Nov 3, 2014 2:47:06 GMT
Remember that it doesn't just have to be an offensive technique (eg. Jenemba's Bunkai Teleport)
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Satin
Newcomer
PL:4,660; Demonic Will (x3): 13,980; Makyo (x8): 37,280; Items: One-Use Space Pod; Zenni: 500
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Satin
Nov 3, 2014 2:48:55 GMT
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Post by Satin on Nov 3, 2014 2:48:55 GMT
Would I replace one of my currents or is it a technique within it's self ?
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Satin
Nov 3, 2014 2:55:06 GMT
Post by President Bao on Nov 3, 2014 2:55:06 GMT
It would have to replace one of your current ones.
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Satin
Newcomer
PL:4,660; Demonic Will (x3): 13,980; Makyo (x8): 37,280; Items: One-Use Space Pod; Zenni: 500
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Satin
Nov 3, 2014 3:17:09 GMT
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Post by Satin on Nov 3, 2014 3:17:09 GMT
I'm kind of tired , but is this good ? I'm not sure how it works ..
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