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Post by Wyntre Cold on Dec 27, 2014 4:06:50 GMT
Ha! If this was a battle, she might call it a victory, but it was more of a trial, eventually going to lead to execution... well, either way, she has won today. Pressing a button on a device in her pocket, the signals where sent for her space-ship to come to her. Yes, run away. You're only proving my point, coward.The familiar sound of her space-ship sounded through the air as a helicopter-sound joined in with a bright light. She knew not to grow attached to new ships as she new they got replaced every few years, but she did like this one. Shame. She's getting another soon anyway. A door opened, revealing the familiar face of Kiwano as she flew inside, ignoring the leaving Saiyan completely. [FIN]
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Post by Scargot on Jan 8, 2015 3:57:20 GMT
Wyntre: 1,306PL Gained Tomare: 767 Zeni Gained It was a good thread guys, was nice to see two girls go at it from different races. Just a little tip of what I like to read in a thread. A bit more description of attacks, like where they are going to hit how your body moves when you use the technique all that. I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi so I do like when people can read and re-read their posts to make sure that is minimal but that's just me nit picking there. First thread graded and it was good.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2015 4:01:49 GMT
Approved. ^
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Nai-Ran
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Post by Nai-Ran on Jan 8, 2015 4:21:01 GMT
Gains have been added
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