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Post by Relis on Aug 5, 2014 19:38:00 GMT
Today was the day the day he became a man, Relis's family had a tradition when a member of the family hits the age of twenty they must go through a series of trials to achieve full induction of the tribe it was then and only then they could learn the secrets of the clan . Relis laid on his bed lost in thought would he be able to pass the test? The legends said the young members would have to go through a series of trials testing both mind body and spirit. This test determined wether or not he would be seen as a man or forever a child in the eyes of his clan , it was a big risk but he would have to do it "your gonna make it don't worry if you survived great apes you can survive this. The next day Relis flew to his families ancestral ranch it had been the property of his family since the time of his distant legendary ancestor Majuub of demon blood . The ranch was on the outside rim of a small city were there was university schools a mayor's office all that stuff rhe the ranch was located on the rim surrounded by a wall blocking all outsiders of the clan , he knew not even Relis's friends from college were allowed on the ranch. He quickly landed near the gate guided by two large men ,"Hey Katchu hey Mursta how you guys doing lately anything happening?" Karachi turned his head and smiled at Relis "hey cousin were doing fine considering are job of course how's bounty hunting going for ya?" "A well ya win some ya lose some big guy , anyway formalities aside I'm here to see my parents so yeah, see ya!" He walked threw the open gates and into the large ranch that belonged the uub family , this was were he grew up were he had his first steps nostalgia began flooding back as he remembered his adventures with his cousins like the time where he thought his dad had eaten his toy and tricked him into drinking laxatives to barf it out "Suresh that didn't end well " he thought to himself now to get to business.
His parents house was not the largest a tan family home nice and simple just like his family , he rung on the doorbell and tapped his foot nervously "hope this all goes well" he thought to himself. As the door opened it opened to reveal a tall well muscled man.with dark skin and hazel eyes and a large spiky Mohawk step out of the door the tall man looked down at Relis with a proud beam and walked him inside "Son I haven't seen you in a year , could you wait a sec Kaila our son is.hear!" Reliable looked t his dad with a look of surprise his days was never really over excited about anything ever ! A average sized Mocha skinned woman walked down the stairs and rushed and hugged relis tight "hey mom it's been awhile you know bounty hunting a really busy business " "That's no excuse not to call dummy !" She said jokingly while knocking on his head . "You guys know why I'm here right ,other than a reunion it's time for the trials to begin " His father turned his face with a proud look in his dark eyes "yea we know son but remember it's going to be tough and you'll need all your strength the trials are tomorrow go rest up a bit.
Relis awoke to the sound of his old alarm clock next to his bed "huh still works" he quickly dressed in the ceremonial warrior garb of his clan a black gi with a black tasset with a kanji saying "demon blood" on the back and a red sash belt . He quickly rushed out of the door and into the square, luckily the ceremony hadn't begun yet . The trials would begin when the inductee went into a meditative trance in which the trials of the mind and spirit commenced . He would then have to battle one aspect of life for warriors it was strength . When he defeated the strength guardian than he would face the ultimate test.
Relis followed the ceremony priest to a dojo where he would begin the trance , "hope I pull this off!"
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Post by Relis on Aug 6, 2014 3:02:13 GMT
This time on world of dragonball souls Relis begins to commence his clan trials to be part of his clan will he succeed ?watch this time on World of dragonball souls! (Theme song)
Relis followed the small priest into a small room the room was red and oriental styled with incense everywhere giving off an alluring smell. "Hmm I was expecting it.to be more imposing?" As he said this the small priest sat him down in the middle of the room on the floor , while he sat down three other old priests sat down the town elders! "Look boy it is as you know time for the trials this is your last chance to back out are you ready?" Relis looked up at the particular priest "Yes I am ready elder , so how do we start?" He said looking at the old man with dark black eyes "you begin the trials you have to go into a meditative state then the spirit guardian's will test you four your skill and courage " Then strange music began to play it lulled relis to relax to close his eyes to sleep....
When Relis awoke he looked around his surroundings , he was in a arena of sorts surrounded by a roaring crowd the arena was huge and had a floor made oh hard sand stone . "Were the balls am I?" Relis thought to himself as h looked around . Out of nowhere a huge pink man appeared , the man was covered in muscles and veins He didn't seem to have nose at all or any hair all he had was one short tentacle coming out of his head . The large man was covered in weird black tattoos and had one gold hoop earring as well as black baggy pants with black curved ribosomes his belt buckle was gold and had a calligraphic s on it . This guy looks like he's straight outta hell! Relis thought to himself . "I know what you're thinking kid and that's because I am outta hell ha ha haaaaaaaaa!"said the large pink man "You can read minds ?" Relis said to the pink man " no idiot , everyone who sees me just thinks that" he said with a smirk "AnywAy I am Super buu the guardian of strength I represent the strength needed to support and protect the clan , I'll be your first opponent which should be fun!" The large man burst forwards with a punch clenched back Relis prepared to block but at the last moment Super threw a kick at Relis's ribs sending him flying to the right . Relis gritted his teeth this guy hit hard! He then rushed into the air firing ki blasts at the large demon , the man easily swatted away the ki blasts without as much as a bat off the eye "you really thought that would do any damage wow young people are idiots , dumbass" Relis grimaced at the pink man and shot forwards at him planning for a head butt to the stomach ,he slammed his head into the pink man's chest and then flipped over his head for a powerful stomp to the head however the pink man grabbed onto his leg and tossed him into a wall "Not bad kid so your not completely worthless and weak still not very smart though" Relis shook himself off and and went in for another attack he launched his fist towards the smug jerks face at full strength the man blocked it so Relix launched a kick and punch combo and all were dodged effortlessly the demon then spun around and slammed a kick into Relis's solarplex and began to follow up with a punch only to be swiftly counters by a elbow that stunned the demon . Taking the chance to put in some damage Relis activated his Burning Fist and slammed his ki enhanced red flaming hand into the demons face , the demon fired back a strong ki wave to push Relis back and wiped the purple blood of off his chin he then shot a furious look at Relis like it had never happened before "Dammit had to hit the face didn't you you bastard !" Relis looked back at Super skeptically "you do realize you work for my family right?" The demon shot another begrudging look before firing off a huge wave "Kamehameha !" He said firing off a powerful pink beam at Relis who deflected it with his forearm . He shook his numb arm a little trying to get the feeling back in his arm "nice try" he said looking back up to see a fist hurtling towards his face . The punch launched him into the air above arena where he was sent back down with a double hammering, he looked up at the sky to see Super hurtling down like a missile at him at the last moment he dashed allowing Super to crash into the floor ."ha ha ha us little pink thing from moms drawer " Relis than began firing up a powerful Burning cannon to finish off the demon as the demon began to stand up he turned to see a huge white blast collide with his face and send him flying backwards and out of the area , he had done it for know but he had always wanted to be a scholar as well I guess free my degree I'll do the mind guardian instead he was covered in little scratches and bruises and had a huge bleeding cut on his arm but he would live for now He thought to himself once again his eyes began to close "I did it ! I proved myself a warrior of the clan uub !"His parents would be so proud of him he hadn't let them down!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 6, 2014 4:02:48 GMT
1100 Pl Awarded, seems like Relis is starting to become a powerful warrior
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Post by Relis on Aug 6, 2014 4:07:27 GMT
Awesome I wanted to go more in-depth about his past to really set his character and backstory
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Post by Deleted on Aug 31, 2014 14:39:37 GMT
Note, this is a completed thread! You definitely look like you've added more detail! Keep up the good work and take a look at looking into synonyms. You do not need to respond to this or the other thread I posted in that you made.
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