Bing Gan
Administrator
PL: 374,871
Enlightenment (x16P), S. Ascension (x23)
Zeni: 13,528
Tag: @bingg
OOC Name: Bing/Biggums/TruetoCaesar
Posts: 3,722
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Post by Bing Gan on Jun 24, 2015 4:54:27 GMT
This was getting ridiculous! It was supposed to be a simple in-and-out. Speak to the Queen, hear her response, then get out. But suddenly this throne room had become filled to the brim with people coming from the woodwork! It seemed Doctor Kouda had decided to bring the Red Eclipse to Vegeta, which Bing honestly didn't expect. He thought that the Ee Scientist might have stayed on Namek for the time being, but perhaps there was more to it then Bing knew. As he thought this however, Kouda revealed he was involved in some way with the Saiyan Empire. It seemed the Red Eclipse had allied themselves with the Saiyans some time ago. It was then that Komoto finally revealed why he was here. He asked Zuccetta for permission to join the Saiyan Empire. Bing's brow furrowed as another internal debate broke out inside his mind. "Are you kidding me?! How in the hell does he think this will be a good idea?!" Said the evil entity known as Ping. The good counterpart replied in an equally annoyed tone "I know, right? This is getting ridiculous."
Ping replied in a confused tone "Yeah I uh...Wait, you're agreeing with me on this one?"Bing simply nodded his head as he watched this stupid display continue. With Kouda basically pointing fingers at Komoto, there was no way Queen Zuccetta would accept his offer. Then even more evidence showed its face. Kaula, a Saiyan woman Bing had met on earth, crashed the party as well. She yelled something about Komoto being a traitor as she put her hand on the hilt of her blade. Bing spoke internally once again "I don't think I can take anymore of this...I might have a freak-out if this goes on any longer." Bing folded his arms and watched as the Queen stepped down from the throne to speak to Komoto up close. Ping replied to his good counterparts words "You know, if you aren't in the mood for this, I could always take over for a bit." The villainous voice chuckled a bit at the end of his sentence, suggesting he was going to do something sinister. Instead of declining, or simply doing something himself, Bing agreed to his evil halves proposal "Screw it...Go ahead and cause a scene if you want, I'm gonna take a nap..." And with those words, Bing relinquished control of his body to the Villain inside. Bing's body was engulfed in a dark crimson aura just as Zuccetta transformed into a Super Saiyan. The Queen shouted, and so too did Ping. "ENOUGH!!!"([SU] Ki Suppression De-activated! Current Sensed PL: 2,456,032!) Ping's voice shook the palace just as heavily as Zuccetta's did, if not a bit more. The humans warriors body was enveloped in a fiery crimson aura, with small sparks of electricity dancing across his tall frame.
He turned to Komoto and spoke with hatred in his voice "You've misled me for the last time you Gummy Bastard! We're through!" His voice echoed through the halls of the Palace, giving a bit more weight to the possessed warriors words.
His booming voice spoke again, with even more anger "I would kill you myself were it not such a loathsome task!" Before continuing, he turned to the Queen "...If you wish to end him, do it now. Otherwise he'll be a thorn in your side forever." The human shook his head and turned away from the throne, floating into the sky before speaking one last time.
"This stupidity has gone on long enough. I'm returning to Earth so I no longer have to deal with this nonsense!" He leaned forward, and blasted through the halls of the Palace at lightning speeds. It wouldn't be likely that anyone would be able to catch him, but there was always a small chance.
(Exit Thread. PL Requested)
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Doctor Kouda
Rising Soul
PL: 58,708; Chaos Form(x7), Muenster Form(x12) Items: One-Use SpacePod, Heavy Weights (1/4 of PL), Royal Spaceship, 2 Extra Seats, Tier 4 Gravity Chamber; Tier 1 Shop, "I Love Bao" T-shirt, Tier 3 Healing Chamber, 1 5kPL Guard, 1 10k PL Guard; Zeni: 176
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Post by Doctor Kouda on Jun 24, 2015 5:16:02 GMT
Edit: I can't delete this because of rules so disregard it.
[OOC: Just need to point out that Pola being in the Red Eclipse has nothing to do with Arcosian Empire. He's an independent villain from what I can tell and even Hitora (who's been chilling with Zucceta) has met him so it's not like we're hiding that. I don't know what was the point of that comic. I suppose it made sense for Komoto (the character) to say that since he's not too up to date with all that IC. Just trying to give you a heads up, Komoto.]
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Post by Deleted on Jun 24, 2015 11:32:05 GMT
Komoto merely remained still and silent when his former boss and his washing machine entered the chamber, but when kaula came in yelling insults like a ten year old child, it only made the Majin giggle like a child himself. I mean what kind of grown adult calls a six foot pink man a goblin. However, it seemed that the queen was one who allowed closer to Earth and Arcose affiliated enemies into her throne room then someone who simply wants to destroy those areas.
Komoto simply bowed at the ignorant queen, then turned around and headed to the chamber, noticing that Bing's alter ego Ping had also released. The Majin could explain how he was turning Bing into a weapon against humans, and the fact that his homicidal side was escaping from the mind of the hero only made things better, but the Majin decided to not explain it. As Komoto walked towards the door, he snapped his fingers, activating his Divine Flan God Creation,leaving a comic book on the royal chair by the Queen with a picture of Kouda shaking hands with an Arcosians on the title page, and its title being 'Knowledge of Komoto, Please Read'.
Regardless, the Majin was still leaving and would be out the door by the time the queen saw the comic.
(Thread Exit | Heavy Weight Bonus | Pl Please)
(Komoto wouldn't know OOC that Pola is known, he would simply use that to help point out some info. in the comic)
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Doctor Kouda
Rising Soul
PL: 58,708; Chaos Form(x7), Muenster Form(x12) Items: One-Use SpacePod, Heavy Weights (1/4 of PL), Royal Spaceship, 2 Extra Seats, Tier 4 Gravity Chamber; Tier 1 Shop, "I Love Bao" T-shirt, Tier 3 Healing Chamber, 1 5kPL Guard, 1 10k PL Guard; Zeni: 176
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Post by Doctor Kouda on Jun 25, 2015 5:51:30 GMT
The red armored bioandroid kneeled beside Kouda as they presented themselves to Zucceta and the stranger that stood beside her. Kouda noticed the sly smile that Zucceta had shot at him that had appeared as quick as it disappeared. Beneath her pride and tough demeanor, Kouda sensed a glimpse of content in the monarch warrior. As Zucceta spoke, Kouda could not help but notice the saiyan warrior that stood beside Lady Death. He had never seen her before and it seemed that she was a person of high importance to be standing atop the blood stained pedestal with Zucceta. There was an intensity in her red eyes that unnerved him. It was unlike that fiery resolve that Kouda felt from Zucceta. No. This red-eyed person was certainly something else, something dangerous. Kouda couldn't help but feel that the strange saiyan would pounce at any second.
A visitor had abruptly entered the room from behind Kouda. The good doctor could feel the wind of the stranger's entrance brush against his cloak. Kouda's first reaction was to turn to see Pah'mazhan. Had the bioandroid perceived the newcomer as a threat to the doctor, Kouda would immediately react. The newcomer bravely stood right beside Pah'mazhan and Kouda. Who was this person? She seemed awfully familiar but Kouda couldn't remember meeting any saiyans like her. She quickly made her way to the majin and bursted fury all over Komoto's face. So close to the majin and with such disrespect, Kouda was surprised that Komoto made no attempt to defend himself. The saiyan intruder accused Komoto of treachery and betrayal, claims that Kouda could support. Komoto had recently went on murderous killing spree of his former allies on Namek. An alliance with him would prove to be very unwise. Whoever this person was, it seemed that she was also of importance to Zucceta as the queen allowed the intruder to speak but she also ascertained that the intruder was in control and respectful to the queen's presence.
After Zucceta explained to Kouda who the red-eyed person finally was, Kouda was surprised. He had never heard of a predecessor surviving after a successor claimed a throne. What was the meaning of this? The queen had referred to the saiyan named Vennel as Commander. Such a title was arguably in equal importance to the monarch status in a belligerent society like Vegeta. Even more astonishing was that such a title was given to the predecessor, this Vennel. As Kouda had predicted before, there was much more to this 'Vennel'. Without turning his head, Kouda's reptilians eyes turned to meet Vennel's stare. The raptor-like eyes gleamed from beneath Kouda's red hood.
"Aaah, I see. Yes. This warrior is the Commander. My name is Kouda. I am a doctor from an organization. It is called the Red Eclipse. Our people have been working with Zucceta and her army for quite some time now. It seems that we will be working together in the coming days. I would like to learn more about you. Perhaps run a few physical tests. I'm nearly on a breakthrough discovery that could greatly benefit your army. We will discuss it more in the coming days."
Zucceta then accepted Kouda's offer to experiment on doomed Cacumber prisoners.
Kouda chuckled with a raspy voice. "Most excellent, your ruthlessness. As I was saying to the Commander, one of my projects would benefit greatly from your help."
The Queen then turned to address the Majin. Apparently Komoto (and perhaps Bing the human) were attempting to enlist within Zucceta's legion. Their offer of temporary membership seemed to have upset the Queen. She unclasped the formalities of her regal attire until she was in nothing but her battle uniform. She raised her bionic arm and unleashed a golden power within the room that nearly pushed Kouda off his feet. Kouda shielded his eyes with a raised arm from the bright light and turbulent gusts of energy. His red robes flapped frantically behind him. This power. Zucceta had reached the golden power of the saiyans. Incredible. Was Pah'mazhan and Hitora aware of this? The two had begun developing a power to sense ki within others. The queen threatened to destroy the majin if he remained in the castle so Komoto left immediately.
Bing the Human who had been standing silently for most of the conversation suddenly began turning a deep red. The human had exploded on Komoto. It seemed that the majin's alliance with him had tipped him over the edge. Kouda had come to respect the thwarting Bing although he was a obstacle nonetheless. He had earned this by displaying an admirable amount of rationality back on Namek. This version of Bing, however, was certainly not the case. Enraged, the human cut his ties with the majin and stormed out of the room leaving Kouda wide eyed and estranged. Before Komoto left, he snapped his fingers and left one of his image filled books atop the queen's throne like litter.
Kouda turned to watch the majin retreat. "I can almost hear the hounds..." Kouda thought and grinned with rows of sharp teeth. As Kouda thought this, he shot a knowing glance at Commander Vennel and then returned to speaking to the queen, making the best attempt to retain composure after the display of strength.
"I also hope to meet with my comrade Hitora while I am here. I have brought Meril, Xylo, Pola, Garlik, Pah'mazhan, and Koramund here to your planet while we help fortify Vegeta. Garlik is a saiyan and he has already worked with one of your own operatives, the saiyan warrior Mayze. Pah'mazhan is also here before you. He has been evolved to be an elite guard and assassin. I can begin rejuvenation treatments right away. Once you give the word, I will send my technicians to set up a lab and base of operations here in the palace or city."
Kouda awaited the Queen and Commander's response. He also kept glancing at the other saiyan in the room (the one wearing the green scouter). Although she seemed to be Zucceta and Vennel's ally, Kouda couldn't help but feel there was an familiarity to her that beckoned him to keep on edge.
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Post by Pah'mazhan on Jun 30, 2015 3:52:33 GMT
Everything happened so fast. The saiyan woman's entrance, Zucceta's outrage, and Bing's sudden fury. Suddenly feeling nervous as Zucceta unleashed what one could reasonably assume was her full power, the bio android began to shiver. Turning his head to Kouda, he waited for any sign of leadership. Finding none, he watched as the majin Komoto left. Nodding in agreement, he bowed before Zucceta and asked, modestly, "my queen, would you like me to chase him? Despite my appearance, I'm more than a match for the one known as Komoto." Allowing his otherwise cold countenance to show a brief smirk, Pah'mazhan bowed once more.
[[Shit post, I'm sorry everyone. Been super busy, sorry for the wait!]]
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Zucceta
Administrator
PL: 379,083
Oozaru(x10) MSSj(x15) S.Ooz(x22) SSj2(25x)
Zeni: 2290
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OOC Name: therevolution
Posts: 2,309
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Post by Zucceta on Jul 1, 2015 16:44:37 GMT
Zucceta's iron stare lingers on Bing. The warrior had revealed his true power, and it cast a shadow over even her ascended state. A small smile seems to play like a ghost around her lips, before she recaptures her stoicism. The human rages against his former ally, before warning Lady Death to end him now. But where's the fun in that? the queen would think. She had a penchant for letting people attempt to get stronger, so their deaths by her hand would be all the more satisfying; that was the hope, at least. Koramund would not turn out as such, a fight yet to happen, but disappointingly short and decisive for the saiyan queen. He had not reached his 'perfect' potential; in fact, he had seemed to have lost power where the queen had multiplied hers exponentially even before the Super Saiyan transformation that had made the fight embarrassingly easy to win.
Komoto simply bowed and left, but not before a snap of his fingers. A comic book appears on Zucceta's chair. The super saiya-jin twists around and stares at the book, suspiciously, but she could feel no malevolent ki from it, and it'd take a lot more than one of Komoto's dirty tricks to finish her off regardless. But oh boy, that art is atrocious. After staring at the front cover, she would pick up the book and settle back into her throne, still sitting in her super saiyan state, her cold teal eyes staring over those still assembled, before she begins to flick through the book, as Kouda begins to speak. She quickly skimmed most of its contents, attempting to ignore the infantile art.
So, the Ee had worked for Wyntre, apparently. Zucceta didn't doubt it; they were a species under the thumb of Arcosian rule, and one Zucceta planned on liberating for her own gain, one way or another. The second point of the comic didn't mean anything to Queen Death; she didn't hate the Arcosians on race alone, and one working with the Red Eclipse, for now, was a benefit to her.
The third chapter described Kouda, and how the doctor would not let her harm the Earth. Zucceta purses her lips at this. Even if she was to believe it, the planet was not on the top of her current priority's. She would revisit the planet when her empire was stronger, and crush the government, and the Tin Man that steered it, beneath her thumb. The fourth panel, about Kouda believing humans to be stronger than saiyans, was laughable at best. If that was the case, why were they all so weak?
She didn't know the specifics of Komoto's fifth chapter, and it mattered very little. Kaula had also called him out as a traitor, and two allies over-rode the one she barely knew. And Zucceta didn't really trust anyone; she'd rather two useful allies than one temporary soldier, though.
Lady Death was somewhat aware of Kaula's links to the being known as Reikiko, and she kept a close eye on it; but Athren's demise to Reikiko had merely served to show what a fool he was for believing in the invincibility of the form she was currently sat in. Its power was still not as great as Virtual Poi's, when the tin man had broken her arm brutally.
However, when specific chapter truly caught her attention.
"Dragon Balls..?"
When she had first met Virtual Poi, the android had been searching from the Red Ribbon headquarters. The relic, he said, contained information on how to track the Dragon Balls... and she had made a comment that the balls might be activated by mouth, and he had hugged her.
Before she had detonated the facility.
Still, she had not really believed the legend of the Dragon Balls; they were a silly fancy pursued by an ancient military, and a childish android.
And yet, here they were, cropping up again.
Perhaps there's something to this after all. She would have to meditate on her previous encounter with Virtual Poi to understand the true meaning of all this.
The next chapter suggested that Komoto could deal with Vi-Poi. Oh please.
And finally, the ultimate chapter described Bing, the human who had just stormed out of the chamber. This 'Ping' was meant as a gift for Zucceta. But Lady Death found this suspicious. How would she ever control such a being if he had not been able to?
And so her attention settles back on Kouda.
"Of course you shall be able to see Hitora. He is not as receptive to training as I might have hoped, however; his form is sloppy and he relies too much on brute power rather than the finesse of war." She pauses. "Koramund is another issue entirely, but I can foresee this one resolving itself in the near future."
"You may set up a clinic in one of the main streets near the palace." And she nods, before turning to Pah'mahzan. She considers his words for a moment, before shrugging. "You may pursue him if you wish. I believe he shall be inconsequential to my plans, dead or alive."
She crumples the stupid comic book in her hands, before her left hand combusts in angry fire. She throws the burning paper on the floor, the soothing smell of carbon hitting her nostrils. "That fool has made me feel dirty. I think I need to shower."
And with that, and a reversion of her hair and eye-colour to normal, the saiyan queen instantly pushes past her assembled court and heads back to her private quarters. She had a lot to think about.
The Dragon Balls...
(I'm out. PL pls.)
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Post by Kaula on Jul 1, 2015 17:57:16 GMT
((Not gonna hold you guys up. Assume Kaula left. Zeni plz))
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Doctor Kouda
Rising Soul
PL: 58,708; Chaos Form(x7), Muenster Form(x12) Items: One-Use SpacePod, Heavy Weights (1/4 of PL), Royal Spaceship, 2 Extra Seats, Tier 4 Gravity Chamber; Tier 1 Shop, "I Love Bao" T-shirt, Tier 3 Healing Chamber, 1 5kPL Guard, 1 10k PL Guard; Zeni: 176
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Post by Doctor Kouda on Jul 2, 2015 6:24:39 GMT
(Leaving thread. Zeni please and thanks)
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Post by Pah'mazhan on Jul 2, 2015 11:10:38 GMT
[[leaving, requesting Power Level]]
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Bing Gan
Administrator
PL: 374,871
Enlightenment (x16P), S. Ascension (x23)
Zeni: 13,528
Tag: @bingg
OOC Name: Bing/Biggums/TruetoCaesar
Posts: 3,722
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Post by Bing Gan on Jul 3, 2015 5:04:26 GMT
Alright you punks, I'll be doing a duo grading with the amazing awesome Pah'Mazhan! Moderators aren't allowed to grade themselves, but I decided to hit this one anyways but ignore myself. On to the Grades!
Bing, you can't be graded by yourself! Let Pah'mazhan do that for you!
The Dastardly Komoto, your Word Count is 1168 and your PL Gains are: 1,468! Current PL Total: 85,834 > New PL Total: 87,303!
The Illustrious Queen Zucceta , your Word Count is 2127 and your PL Gains are: 3934! Current PL Total: 157,707 > New PL Total: 161,641! I cannot add your gains, so please add them yourself when you get a chance!
The Sinister Doctor Kouda, your Word Count is 1857 and your Zeni Gains are: 1672! Current Zeni Total: 2,434 > New Zeni Total: 4,106!
The Loyal Pah'Mazhan, your Word Count is 866 and your PL Gains are: 1357! Current PL Total: 164,771 > New PL Total: 166,068!
The Bold Kaula, your Word Count is 608 and your Zeni Gains are: 599! Current Zeni Total: 1,901 > New Zeni Total: 2,500!
Slowly Adding Gains... All done! Pah'mazhan you're up!
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Post by Pah'mazhan on Jul 3, 2015 5:20:14 GMT
Alright, tag out!
Bing! You typed 2297 words and will be rewarded with 2968 Power Level!
(169,997) + (2968) = (172,965)
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Post by Vennel on Jan 19, 2016 2:13:12 GMT
If it's not too late to ask, could I request my post be graded and I receive PL? Bing Gan
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Bing Gan
Administrator
PL: 374,871
Enlightenment (x16P), S. Ascension (x23)
Zeni: 13,528
Tag: @bingg
OOC Name: Bing/Biggums/TruetoCaesar
Posts: 3,722
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Post by Bing Gan on Jan 19, 2016 2:33:46 GMT
Vennel, your Word Count is 1022 and your PL Gains are: 2135! (Those weights are being squeezed of all their worth, eh?)
Current PL Total: 136,320 > New PL Total: 138,455!
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