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Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2016 3:05:11 GMT
Samu and Damu ; Alt
Name: Viktor ZeroAlias: Detective Zero Species: Human Gender: Male Age: 23 Appearance:5'6ft , 150lb Base Form Second Form (x6) History:Born in a whole different universe on Earth, there was constant war, constant drafting. The children who grew up on Earth had to be raised as soldiers from their parents or guardians. Zero being born to a guardian who invested his time in training the young soldier until the age of thirteen. Where he was placed in boot camp for five years. Upon the age of eighteen he was fit and ready for survival. He was ready to protect his planet. Entering the military, he joined the Army branch and was drafted straight into the war zone with his best friend Jason. The both of them were stationed at a city, and and protecting that city against the androids. The both of them arrived at one of the ten creators of these androids base and were ready to take him down. The creator using a family hostage in order to get Jason to betray Zero. This worked and the both of them fought until the entire base started to cave in on itself. Zero somehow someway ended up in this universe and he doesn't know what happened to Jason. He now lives on this Earth, this universe, wondering how to make it back home to save his Earth. He also came to realize that in this universe, he had died a hero and visited his own gravestone. Starting Planet: Earth Techniques: Offensive[N1] Strong Grip - The user will grab the throat of their enemy and squeeze tightly, doing 33% Pl of damage. [UP2] Throat Grip - The user will grab the throat of their enemy and squeeze tightly, doing 66% Pl of damage. [MP3] Death Grip - The user will grab the throat of their enemy and squeeze tightly, doing 100% Pl of damage. SupportUtilitySpecialItems: 500 Zenni One-Use Pod
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Zucceta
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PL: 379,083
Oozaru(x10) MSSj(x15) S.Ooz(x22) SSj2(25x)
Zeni: 2290
Tag: @admin
OOC Name: therevolution
Posts: 2,309
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Post by Zucceta on Nov 30, 2016 12:13:07 GMT
I've tried reading this history several times before I came to the realisation that it isn't, in actuality, a history but a moment in a history. Universe 10? What? I have no idea what is happening.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2016 14:55:30 GMT
No idea what's happening? Did you read all of it?
The break down is that he enters the military. I cut his past before the military because I plan to use all of lthat for later. Like a mystery to his character. Now I'm in universe 10, based on the history, it's androids against humans. Because of our technology that has advanced, we were able to have a rifle that has ki bullets. Basically what Bulma made in order for mai to shoot Black goku. Basically, my guy has a best friend who ultimately betrays him due to the android creator capturing his family. There fight leads to the destruction of the creators base, and that destruction and the cave that they are in caving down on them, causes Zero to travel to this universe. Which will all be explained in my solo threads. Keep the mystery alive.
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Zucceta
Administrator
PL: 379,083
Oozaru(x10) MSSj(x15) S.Ooz(x22) SSj2(25x)
Zeni: 2290
Tag: @admin
OOC Name: therevolution
Posts: 2,309
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Post by Zucceta on Nov 30, 2016 15:56:58 GMT
You need to include a character's full history in their profile. Also, we don't use Super universes on this site.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2016 19:15:46 GMT
Hopefully this is a better history. And will be doing a BP.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 5, 2016 0:27:52 GMT
Bumped not sure why my bio not being Checked
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Post by Pieter Wolfbane on Dec 16, 2016 2:29:16 GMT
Hey, sorry about the wait Jason. We've been getting a bit swamped with the holidays, so it's a bit difficult to get to things. One of the things I've seen in your profile is something in regards to some attack by androids in a city. Perhaps you could expand upon this, so we can see what sort of androids they were? At the moment, it only seems as if you're trying to play a soldier during the time of Androids 17 and 18. Ergo, I need you to take a look at expanding your history and also observing out plot section, so you can flesh your character out a lot more! Here's the link to help you out. A major attack would've been seen and taken out by one of the other players (or even committed by one of the other players!), so with that being said, let's see about getting some more bulk to your history! Now, just to be sure you know as well, as a clarification, your techniques will develop power based upon the amount of charge per turn (up to 5 turns). Other than that and the history, everything else seems alright. Let Zucceta or I know when you've gotten to these changes!
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