Post by Lugumé on Mar 13, 2017 18:14:56 GMT
My Character I am working on named Lugumé, is a Brench-seijin/Saiyan hybrid that is in (Work in Progress) and for his history I wanted to know if I can include a part that involves a husband (The father is an elite member of the Arcosian Empire and hates the Saiyans) attacking his wife (The mother is a Saiyan women who has kept her secret of being a saiyan from her husband). I have read the rules about what I can and can not say in posts in order to keep this site rated pg-13 but I was curious if something like this is or is not acceptable to post. In his history it would go like this;
On the day Lugumé was born, his Father over joyed at site of his child, but that came to a screeching halt. His father saw the tail of a Saiyan on his child and became enraged. He screamed, " You and I had gotten married and conceived a child, and yet you have the AUDACITY to break our sacred vows and have an affair with me?! ''Did what I say mean nothing to you!?'' The Mother then replied, '' No my dear husband, I have not forsaken our vows, nor have I had an affair with you.'' '' I have been keeping this secret from you because I thought you would leave me if I told you this.'' '' I am a Saiyan, and I deplore this for not telling you sooner dear.'' After hearing what his wife had just told him, he entered an enraged state due to his hatred towards Saiyans. ''I'LL KILL YOU, YOU DIRTY SAIYAN!!!'' He then grabbed his sword and thrust-ed it into her. He pulled it out and was going to deliver a finishing blow and then he heard his child crying. His Father snapped out of his enraged state and had looked to see what he had done. ''WHAT HAVE I DONE!?'' He cried out. He began to cry heavily and said, '' I-I am so sorry.... I did not mean for that to happen...'' The mother replied,'' Do not fret dear, this is not much to deal with, just next time don't pull out the sword.'' The father then said, '' Dear what I have done is unacceptable, as a man, and as a husband... I will get you a doctor and after i know you are fine again, I am going back to Akai Brenchia.'' '' I am leaving lugumé with you dear, so that way he can live with a better parent.''
This is a summary I would like to include in my characters history but I would like to get confirmation from a mod if this is alright to use since it has violence between Husband and Wife.
To whomever reads this and answers, Thank you for reading this and answering my question. Have a nice day.
On the day Lugumé was born, his Father over joyed at site of his child, but that came to a screeching halt. His father saw the tail of a Saiyan on his child and became enraged. He screamed, " You and I had gotten married and conceived a child, and yet you have the AUDACITY to break our sacred vows and have an affair with me?! ''Did what I say mean nothing to you!?'' The Mother then replied, '' No my dear husband, I have not forsaken our vows, nor have I had an affair with you.'' '' I have been keeping this secret from you because I thought you would leave me if I told you this.'' '' I am a Saiyan, and I deplore this for not telling you sooner dear.'' After hearing what his wife had just told him, he entered an enraged state due to his hatred towards Saiyans. ''I'LL KILL YOU, YOU DIRTY SAIYAN!!!'' He then grabbed his sword and thrust-ed it into her. He pulled it out and was going to deliver a finishing blow and then he heard his child crying. His Father snapped out of his enraged state and had looked to see what he had done. ''WHAT HAVE I DONE!?'' He cried out. He began to cry heavily and said, '' I-I am so sorry.... I did not mean for that to happen...'' The mother replied,'' Do not fret dear, this is not much to deal with, just next time don't pull out the sword.'' The father then said, '' Dear what I have done is unacceptable, as a man, and as a husband... I will get you a doctor and after i know you are fine again, I am going back to Akai Brenchia.'' '' I am leaving lugumé with you dear, so that way he can live with a better parent.''
This is a summary I would like to include in my characters history but I would like to get confirmation from a mod if this is alright to use since it has violence between Husband and Wife.
To whomever reads this and answers, Thank you for reading this and answering my question. Have a nice day.